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Wednesday, March 28, 2007

Life and him.

this is basically an imagined conversation. so i would use this colour for life and some other colour for the person. now while u are reading this please imagine life to be speaking in a mocking way, like that witchy thing witha nasal twang ( like eminem's voice in the song " my dads's gone crazy" which he puts in for his mother.)

I go down on my knees
them which bleed
and ask life
to ease out..
The F*&%^ing bitch instead
vehmently shrieks out..

" now u go nut case

what the fcuk were you doing as a kid
sleeping , snoring and dying dud??
now that you are a qualified loser
u want me to slow down jerk ??"

I say

" Life..... goddess..... or whosoever the f*&k u are
i agree that i have been a lazy
dog so far..

never did a job, never earned my bread...
(sighs)

(energised..)
But NOW i SEE the future BRIGHT
NOW I CLAIM TOMMOROW AS MINE!!!
( life cutting in...)
,,,
big words out of your small mouth huh?

you rattle as if mad
you going, going down bad..
(pleading and cutting in..)

but gimme a chance ma!

i have been working my arse,,, na?

people crazier than me , hit gold doing nuthing man
atleast ive been working hard like i should man!!

Alchemist's gold ,I don't want
her throne's diamond's ,I cant claim

all I ask for is some constant cash and max a Porsche' ma
so I can sit my arse off and rock that tuner ma

c'mon see my state and lift me up
fast forward the struggle and fit me up

Angels, lotions and bubble baths
Sweet loving, plasma screens , mansions that stand apart..
..(cuts in)....(frustated)


Shut up!!!!(shouting)


cause iam gonna send u to hell
die and die again in the misery u so dread!

bats, blood and lava baths
if u please
world champ dreamer
keep ur eyes closed at least!!

( cooling down)


wake up to a new glory son
ill give u ur shot

give u things easy?
no man
u don't stand a chance!

die and die again only to be reborn daily with vigor.

work hard like an ant
and ill give u what i can.

(complying and with no choice.... he says to life )

ok, as u say...

and after a while....

(Says to himself " fucking relentless bitch")


and gets ready for the next battle.

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6 Comments:

Blogger Ruchika Shishodia said...

this is the best you have ever ever written.. its fucking original, and i can relate it to ur life... its great!

11:58 AM

 
Blogger Unknown said...

koolwell written u have immense talent and thanx for leaving ur wonderfull comments

11:23 PM

 
Blogger AVIANA said...

Welcome, Welcome, Welcome to my little blog! It's always nice to meet new people in this blog world! :)

So you like my pic huh? Isn't it gorgeous! The name, the meaning, the pic just make it seem like almost anything is possible. The sky is the limit!

You have an interesting writing style here! Not interesting in a bad way but in a good way! Keep writing! I will always push for creativity because it is the godfather/godmother of positivity!

I hope you are not cynical of life from reading the post. Please be sure of your writing. It's good!

Lisa

6:20 AM

 
Blogger Shanks said...

Thanks a lot ruchi, Bhavin and lisa,

i dont know wether its a best, but yeah i wrote it in frustation... as ive said.. Sublimation.

lisa i totally agree that wrting is the godfather of creativity....

11:42 AM

 
Blogger mad angles said...

:) nice blog!

8:05 AM

 
Blogger Invincible said...

good one man!!

4:12 AM

 

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