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Sunday, March 04, 2007



A beautiful drop
blurring the reality in revenge...(prologue)


Racing down the air come
and splash into oblivion
and cool me with your wetness.

Hang by the leaves
magnitised
and dont fall until
another one comes and takes ur place

down below
then fall
form bubbles and burst
an interplay of love and lust

form waves only to die
only to merge and mix
into someone else
tap the leaves
like drumsticks
heartsounds and homesick.

smell of wet soil
feel of wet soil
dirt of wet soil

invigorate the green
energize the environs
activate the chirping
and my dogs searching

down you come
only to make us dream
only to give us hope
only to drift us away
from reality
to an insight of heaven.


8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

beautifully written and expressed.

2:15 AM

 
Blogger Chandni said...

good reading your stuff
me likes this blog
me shall b back :D

8:08 AM

 
Blogger Ruchika Shishodia said...

I quite like this one.. except that I hate the word environs..but its nice :)

11:36 AM

 
Blogger Shanks said...

thanks anonymous, chandni and ruchika

environs is somehow one of my favs.

10:14 AM

 
Blogger maiylah said...

such a beautiful shot!
"...only to drift us away
from reality
to an insight of heaven."

it does just that, doesn't it? :)
lovely!

5:56 PM

 
Blogger Invincible said...

nice one...neately described!!

1:28 PM

 
Blogger Unknown said...

well written poem doc wow so good language and randomisation of thoughts

3:05 AM

 
Blogger Shanks said...

thanks,, Invincible..Maiylah...
Protegeoflife...

9:02 AM

 

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